Sorry for the delay ive had like no phone or internet today and i kept losing power!!!!
This review is for the Siren system page, And the sub-articles Siren I and Sire II.
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
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] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
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] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
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] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
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] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
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] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
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] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
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] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
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] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
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] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
I see no issues in spelling, grammar, formatting, etc. And these articles are well written and well made as to be expected.
APPROVED
Please make sure that the articles are properly backlinked as to avoid any issues in the future and they make their way onto the appropriate pages such as technology encyclopedias where applicable, Lists for starships, planets, equipment, and anything relevant to these systems and planets that it should be properly listed on. ?
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] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
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] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
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] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
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] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
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] 5. Remind the submitter to link to the newly-approved page wherever it makes sense to do so.