Approved Character [SNV Gam'trosha] Dy'ra Cher'naya

[BloodyScarlet]

character page: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:dy_ra_cher_naya
GM: @Kyle

 

[Kyle]

Hmmm, a good start but there are a few issues. The history needs to be worked on, as it is a bit.. jumbled.

If its ok with you, I'd like to take your history and make a few correction to it.

 

[BloodyScarlet]

You can do the corrections you need Kyle

 

[Kyle]

Ok, sorry it took awhile; but fixed up the history a bit. I combined some of your sentences into one, added a name here and there so readers will know 'whom' you are referring to, and also fixed up the grammar and structure a bit.

 

[BloodyScarlet]

Okay thank you Kyle, does that mean she is acceptable?

 

[Kyle]

It is yes, probably the best way to join the group right now is to have her disembark from one of the landed transports and from there we'll get you going =)

 

[Aendri]

@Kyle , are we good here, or is there still some work needed?

 

[Kyle]

Yea this was done last month, which I had stamped with 'approved'

Wonder what happened to the post x-x