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[Sogol Group] Selected Foods #1

Ok, the Sweetstones, Soa and Cloudstinger puffs are good to go.

But, on the Mead page there seems to be something missing in this sentence where you says known as , .....

micro-brewers whos products run the gamut between light and sweet ales known as , to more bitter tawny drinks and rich golden wines
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Hey Exhack,

Please address the concern raised so these can be approved.
 
Nashoba said:
Ok, the Sweetstones, Soa and Cloudstinger puffs are good to go.

But, on the Mead page there seems to be something missing in this sentence where you says known as , .....

micro-brewers whos products run the gamut between light and sweet ales known as , to more bitter tawny drinks and rich golden wines
Click to expand...
Click to expand...

Other than the error Nashoba pointed out this article look pretty good from a grammar/spelling point of view. Good job Soresu and Exhack ;3
 
I've removed the 'known as', mostly because I can't think of an honest name for them that would probably be wasted anyway.
 
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