Alright, time for another strafing run on the tech forums. I’m just going to go in order of what I see in the submission.
Wes will undoubtedly ask for a picture both under the title and in the appearance section. It shouldn’t be to hard to either make one in DOGA or ask someone to make one for you.
I like the Namesake bit and the wording used in it. It implies a lot of back story and RP behind the ship without creating any real issues with continuality. I may have to steal this bit from you. I also like how you switched to the design goals bit to add more of a civilian feel.
Under general your listing isn’t in the exact same format as the template but I don’t think that should matter, though it is a bit weird to look at.
I can see why you listed the water speed in knots but you might want to list it in km/hr too for ease of use.
Under bridge it says the captains chair faces the three other stations but four are listed. (Navigation, sensors, comm.+schedule, and pilot/engineering)
Descriptions in most of the areas seem a bit skimpy. I’d like to see a bit more description in the notable internal features area at least so players will have a better idea of what everything looks like.
The shields are listed at DR2, but flying micrometeorites and such would be DR3 or 4ish at least. I would think you would want a more powerful shield just so you don’t have to worry about that but it is your choice and not something to hold up approval over.