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Approved Character Starship Helmsman - Asrid Thorsson

Forgive me for asking, but is her name supposed to be "Astrid?"
 
Yes, but it can change.
What do you mean?

I sent a PM to Gamerofthegame to make sure he looks at this thread.
 
Lordy knows I need help in that regard, Wes.

Anyway.

Your statblock is fine, description is fine, however you ears seem to be a hold over from when Asie was briefly a neko. Minkans can have 'em, of course, but I'd thought I'd bring it to attention.

Personality is fine, though the ship AI thing comes a bit out of the blue.

You don't have a creator, as you aren't a neko. Feel free to snip that. The rest of your history, though, is good! And you actually have one, which is in itself outstanding.

Skills are fine, though a small note is that you can very easily get tasked with other operations at the bridge, such as shooting the guns and so forth whenever necessary. Not likely for the pilot, but something to keep in mind.

Inventory is fine.

Finances are, as per usual, not necessary to keep a track of if you don't want, but fine.

Nothing really to hold you back here! Approved
 
Ok. I pulled the ears, AI mention in primary Personality area, and Creator. I have also fleshed out the Starship Operations skill area.
 
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