Approved Character [Su'kan] Godric Erenpil

@Ira @Wes

Behold, ANOTHER CHARACTER OF MINE, crafted by ME! And finished at FOUR AM! FINISHED USED AS A VERY LOOSE TERM. But at the same time, not really! Mistakes were made, and there are some finer points missing (Date of birth, and Planet). Please take care of me, I just wanted to show Ira what I had while at the same time receive some criticism because I actually like most of the character and what i've written down. Just needed some ideas flowing for when the body transition into the newer Yamatai body would best be placed, and if there are any major cultural planets or locales that promote acting and drama and stuff. Or better yet, if there are any Yamatai Plays or theaters like the Elysian theater, because in my search I have found none. I even bs'ed a play. This character seems like a major farcry in style compared to the other characters i've made but he was fun to make, anyone got any suggestions, forgive me if I was too hasty. Speaking of haste, now to create a Kishargal loli! later....

Moved page from character:whateveryourcharactersnamehere to https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:godric_erenpil

Please fix the repeated material in the personality section.

How old do you want him to be? It's YE 39 now. See Yamataian Calendar

Oh rip, i didn't even notice that. If he was born in YE 11 he would 28 right?

Yes (provided his birth date has already passed). And that's equivalent to 24 Earth (IRL) years.

My suggestion is to give him an actual date of birth and a place of birth.

In YE 11, the known planets that were already colonized by Nepleslian-type humans were:

1. Geshrintall (now Planet Yamatai; most of them died in the Great Plague of YE 08 and were replaced by the Geshrin species)
2. Planet Nepleslia
3. Damasica (Neo Kohana)
4. Kennewes

Alright, some fixes were applied. Man I write like a drunk when I am tired and just plain stupid. Thank you much.

Was this character approved, @Ira ?

Yes, Character is perfect and approved.