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Approved Character Syaboa Purpur
- Thread starter BloodyScarlet
- Start date
Hi BloodyScarlet,
Thanks for your interest in the Hidden Sun Clan,
Overall a fairly good job of making a Clan character. A few items need to be addressed.
The Baqnor actually contains testing in all the areas. A simple edit of what you have would be to say that she and her sister received their highest makrs in the section you already have listed. This personalizes the results, but all Qaktoro have to pass all of the Bagnor.
You did not include the default skill that comes from the warrior occupation I added that.
Please go through the skills you have replace <Your Character> with your character's name. You need to decide if she has chose to learn the offered alien languages, if not remove that line.
You might want to consider adding an additional skill, since the clan prefers their people to be well rounded. You could have you character learn one of the artisan skills, that are listed on the occupation page. This is though optional, and you can always add them later.
You also have the option its not required to have Syaboa outfitted with a Iginâ Yoqa (Neural Link)
Once these minor changes are accomplished this character will be good to to.
Thanks for your interest in the Hidden Sun Clan,
Overall a fairly good job of making a Clan character. A few items need to be addressed.
The Baqnor actually contains testing in all the areas. A simple edit of what you have would be to say that she and her sister received their highest makrs in the section you already have listed. This personalizes the results, but all Qaktoro have to pass all of the Bagnor.
You did not include the default skill that comes from the warrior occupation I added that.
Please go through the skills you have replace <Your Character> with your character's name. You need to decide if she has chose to learn the offered alien languages, if not remove that line.
You might want to consider adding an additional skill, since the clan prefers their people to be well rounded. You could have you character learn one of the artisan skills, that are listed on the occupation page. This is though optional, and you can always add them later.
You also have the option its not required to have Syaboa outfitted with a Iginâ Yoqa (Neural Link)
Once these minor changes are accomplished this character will be good to to.
BloodyScarlet
Well-Known Member
Okay I have changed it and I will not take the Neural Link.
