Arr.
I'm doing everything nowwadays. Ousting poor old Jaqueline in it, too. Poor oldy.
Anywho.
Wiki note; Species you have a URL in place where you could go simply just for the wiki page. Gets rid of the planet next to his name if you don't want it, even though it looks interesting.
Everything else in that section is fine, although I'm beginning to think we probably ought to remove the zodiac sign... Hm.
Description is fine, although you kinda describe the cybernetics in much greater detail then the body. Which is fine, really.
Personality is fine, the main bit actually bothers me but I can't pin point why so I'm not going to buzz you. Everything else is fantastic, though.
History is dandy.
Skillz, now, look quite short. Oh well. Looks like Mr. Seal will be the only when doing all the combat on the ship, hee. All the skills are fine, although vehicles suddenly irks me; Why does all the Lorath military know all about the UOC's new stuff when they aren't that old at all? By that I mean training... Hm. But that isn't something for you, more of Taco.
Inventory is fine. In truth I tend to just briefly skim it, heh. Your monies are also fine.
Huh. Not even something small on this one... Although Taco beat me here...
And now, in this hopefully just DANDY shade of green, this character gets a penguin stamp of approval. Go off onto your harem ship being the only male other then Blast on the ship. You keep getting charries in this position, you stud you.