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To me, this submission looks... Incomplete. Most of the "xx" sections are supposed to be replaced with actual data, for example; on top of that, the amount of planets in the system needs to be specified, and then the planets themselves also need to be listed.
Please list your subarticles, and your sub-subarticles. Those are all unapproved. (They seem rather okay, though!)
I’d suggest break this submission up into first the sub articles and the sub-sub articles, each to its own thread. And after that, submit the overencompassing article.
So, I filled in the gaps from The Principality of Nojah. I also filled in the Kyzu system wiki and tweeted a thing wrong with it, so there should be no further gaps.
Traditionally "independent" has been treated as a pseudo-faction on SARP and single-system colonies of humans and random aliens have been counted under the independent faction. It would be okay to make a new star system with humans in it as an NPC faction as long as they had a clear plot plan for how they will appear in the story and also that it would make sense for them to be where they are at the present time.
I don’t mean to be rude, @Ametheliana, but in my humble opinion the article you linked is another setting element, not a “plot plan” like the one for the Eucharis.
Edit: Dragon, however, doesn’t have access to the GM/FM forums - so perhaps he (Dragon) could write one up and send it to Jack or Zack for posting?
IMO the system article is still a stub. It's got a nice couple of front paragraphs but it peters out quickly.
The planet naming is... Weird, as well. Only two planets have """""actual names""""" but the others don't? I think it'd be nice to have either one way or the other, all having names or none having names.
As a completely personal thing, I don't like the idea of a planet that was inhabited by humans and happened to be undetected for a long time and stuff. Call me out on being a bit crazy (I probably am, to be honest) but it makes me think of PACT a little too much for my personal comfort.
In response to @Arbitrated, the planets will remained named the way they are for now. Since it’s newly discovered. They don’t know the names of the planets yet and either have to find out. Or create new ones. So, for now, the unidentified ones are given, such names.
They discovered the planets, they just don’t have names for all of them. The ones that are named, they discovered from overhearing the locals on the planet Xuno. The rest are not named.
They have a lack of interest and are constantly dealing with conflict amongst themselves. So you’re telling me to add a planetary rap sheet for every planet?