Re: Muirgen Wallace
Wes -- I had to move his posts all around and whatnot; he didn't make the thread correctly.
I'm on Christmas vacation, in a way, so I'm not wholly available. I'll get to this when I can, but the earliest guaranteed time is going to be Saturday. That's barring flight delays from horrendously shitty weather, which has pummelled the Northwest.
From a quick glance -- your skills are the most glaring hang-up. You can't just list a bunch of words under a skill; you need to write out what he can actually do, and if you're using standard skills for Yamatai, you need to use the boilerplate text -- no more, no less.