Name: Takuma Kimura
General Information
Species: Yamataian Gender: Male
Age: 22
Family / Creators: Unknown
Employer: Star Army
Occupation: Engineering
Rank: Jôtô Hei
Current Assignment: Pending
Physical Characteristics
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 155
Build and Skin color: Slightly above average build, white skin color.
Facial Features and Eye color: Blue eyes
Hair color and Style: Brown, semi-long, straight hair. Not very well kept care of.
Distinguishing Features: His hair always tends to stick out on the right side of his head. He will always have extra pockets on his thighs where he keeps anything that he thinks he could need before he returns. Always wears a wristband that he got when he was back on his home planet. He stands at around 5'10" and has an average build. He has semi-long brown hair that will never stay straight.
Psychological Characteristics
Personality:
Takuma tends to like going out of his way to do his duty, which can sometimes cause problems when he goes overboard. He dresses in his combat gear when hes not in uniform. When Takuma needs to get something done, he may not do it right away, but expect a good job before the deadline is reached. Takuma does not pay much attention to his physical appearance, just that he does not look like he just rolled out of bed and ran to his post. He is a nervous and shy person who has trouble making new friends. One of his favorite things to do is to randomly throw out a joke about whats going on to get people to laugh a little and lighten up.
Likes: Getting a laugh out of someone, challenges, and anything that can give him a good time in the long run.
Dislikes: Entering atmospheres, free-falling, and arrogant peers.
Goals: To see all of the wonders of space.
History
Takuma had always dreamed of being in space, but didn't know how to do this, until he say a recruiting campaign for the Star Army. He made this his goal, that he would work on a spacecraft see all of the wonders of space.
At the age of 18, Takuma left his home planet and joined the Star Army as an engineer. Two years later, he learned to pilot small crafts and he became a shuttle pilot. He continued this job with a feeling of boredom. He was not going to get to see space like this. After requesting a new position, he was granted the job of technician and engineer. He is currently awaiting assignment.
Skills
Communication: After serving in the army for several years, Takuma learned how to easily get into contact with someone, from headsets to ship to ship in combat and non-combat conditions.
Fighting: Takuma has received adequate training in Shorin-Ryu Shorin-Kan fighting style and learned how to use a power armor
Technology Operations:
Takuma has graduated from a tech school and has certification for the operating system Kessaku OS, as well as many foreign operating systems, for when he is behind enemy lines.
Starship Operations
He also used to be a shuttle pilot and knows how to navigate and fly any small starships.
Mathematics: After graduating from a tech school, Takuma has built up a mathematics skill high enough to meet technician/engineer requirements.
Maintenance and Repair: Takuma has had a keen interest in computers ever since he was a kid. In his training he learned how to fix a malfunctioning computer as well as how to repair a power armor on the field.
Demolitions: Back in his teens, he worked as a construction worker, mainly demolition, so he knows how to use explosives.
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Just noting that this is my first character and any suggestions on ways to improve on it would be appreciated, thanks.
Until its finalized it will keep getting updated so I will say what revision it is on the next line
Revision 7 ♦
General Information
Species: Yamataian Gender: Male
Age: 22
Family / Creators: Unknown
Employer: Star Army
Occupation: Engineering
Rank: Jôtô Hei
Current Assignment: Pending
Physical Characteristics
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 155
Build and Skin color: Slightly above average build, white skin color.
Facial Features and Eye color: Blue eyes
Hair color and Style: Brown, semi-long, straight hair. Not very well kept care of.
Distinguishing Features: His hair always tends to stick out on the right side of his head. He will always have extra pockets on his thighs where he keeps anything that he thinks he could need before he returns. Always wears a wristband that he got when he was back on his home planet. He stands at around 5'10" and has an average build. He has semi-long brown hair that will never stay straight.
Psychological Characteristics
Personality:
Takuma tends to like going out of his way to do his duty, which can sometimes cause problems when he goes overboard. He dresses in his combat gear when hes not in uniform. When Takuma needs to get something done, he may not do it right away, but expect a good job before the deadline is reached. Takuma does not pay much attention to his physical appearance, just that he does not look like he just rolled out of bed and ran to his post. He is a nervous and shy person who has trouble making new friends. One of his favorite things to do is to randomly throw out a joke about whats going on to get people to laugh a little and lighten up.
Likes: Getting a laugh out of someone, challenges, and anything that can give him a good time in the long run.
Dislikes: Entering atmospheres, free-falling, and arrogant peers.
Goals: To see all of the wonders of space.
History
Takuma had always dreamed of being in space, but didn't know how to do this, until he say a recruiting campaign for the Star Army. He made this his goal, that he would work on a spacecraft see all of the wonders of space.
At the age of 18, Takuma left his home planet and joined the Star Army as an engineer. Two years later, he learned to pilot small crafts and he became a shuttle pilot. He continued this job with a feeling of boredom. He was not going to get to see space like this. After requesting a new position, he was granted the job of technician and engineer. He is currently awaiting assignment.
Skills
Communication: After serving in the army for several years, Takuma learned how to easily get into contact with someone, from headsets to ship to ship in combat and non-combat conditions.
Fighting: Takuma has received adequate training in Shorin-Ryu Shorin-Kan fighting style and learned how to use a power armor
Technology Operations:
Takuma has graduated from a tech school and has certification for the operating system Kessaku OS, as well as many foreign operating systems, for when he is behind enemy lines.
Starship Operations
He also used to be a shuttle pilot and knows how to navigate and fly any small starships.
Mathematics: After graduating from a tech school, Takuma has built up a mathematics skill high enough to meet technician/engineer requirements.
Maintenance and Repair: Takuma has had a keen interest in computers ever since he was a kid. In his training he learned how to fix a malfunctioning computer as well as how to repair a power armor on the field.
Demolitions: Back in his teens, he worked as a construction worker, mainly demolition, so he knows how to use explosives.
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Just noting that this is my first character and any suggestions on ways to improve on it would be appreciated, thanks.
Until its finalized it will keep getting updated so I will say what revision it is on the next line
Revision 7 ♦