Gamerofthegame
Inactive Member
Soul crushing.
But much better!
Submission Type: Planet revamp
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=system:tatiana
Faction:
FM Approved Yet? Wes gave the thumbs up to do this, though I imagine he would also be the one approving it so this is a bit moot.
Faction requires art? ~
For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No, but others need altering. See notes.
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? Yes, a long time ago when I was senator. Gave it a rush job, came back to fix it.
Notes: The general spirit of everything is still there, just more. And better written. I have purposefully also written it to be a bit baiting for any Independant World League plots, as honestly it kind of makes to much sense to not. However, as you may notice; the people who dislike the Empire are a minor, grumbling faction. It's not going to randomly flip on its own, not with a Legion sitting on it. Speaking of;
The following pages need to be edited, which I will do after approval if (you) do not;
Changing the Legion VII to either be home'd at Tatiana or deployed there in the notes.
Tatiana's population given a hefty boost. I am thinking something more like Anisa's 300 million. For a certain amount of a reality check; New York City has twenty million people, including all the delicious Metropolitan goodness. And it's a planet of bundles of 'em. As consequence, you can tank the population of some of the refugee worlds.
(On that subject, the numbers for that page in general are kinda... Silly. Namely for worlds that are homeworlds to the rarely recognized species. Like lamias and space bears.)
I took some liberties with the general Mishhu attitude, but I both didn't want to have to rewrite the "Fixed and better!" Tatiana a year later and I felt it made sense for them to not get in the muck of things, Yamatai right there and all. Priorities.
I also actually made the planet a "Warmaster" world. A master of (war) bureaucracy, but hey.
While I skimmed it by after, this was all done in one heady go, so feel free to point out anything off.
But much better!
Submission Type: Planet revamp
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=system:tatiana
Faction:
FM Approved Yet? Wes gave the thumbs up to do this, though I imagine he would also be the one approving it so this is a bit moot.
Faction requires art? ~
For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No, but others need altering. See notes.
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? Yes, a long time ago when I was senator. Gave it a rush job, came back to fix it.
Notes: The general spirit of everything is still there, just more. And better written. I have purposefully also written it to be a bit baiting for any Independant World League plots, as honestly it kind of makes to much sense to not. However, as you may notice; the people who dislike the Empire are a minor, grumbling faction. It's not going to randomly flip on its own, not with a Legion sitting on it. Speaking of;
The following pages need to be edited, which I will do after approval if (you) do not;
Changing the Legion VII to either be home'd at Tatiana or deployed there in the notes.
Tatiana's population given a hefty boost. I am thinking something more like Anisa's 300 million. For a certain amount of a reality check; New York City has twenty million people, including all the delicious Metropolitan goodness. And it's a planet of bundles of 'em. As consequence, you can tank the population of some of the refugee worlds.
(On that subject, the numbers for that page in general are kinda... Silly. Namely for worlds that are homeworlds to the rarely recognized species. Like lamias and space bears.)
I took some liberties with the general Mishhu attitude, but I both didn't want to have to rewrite the "Fixed and better!" Tatiana a year later and I felt it made sense for them to not get in the muck of things, Yamatai right there and all. Priorities.
I also actually made the planet a "Warmaster" world. A master of (war) bureaucracy, but hey.
While I skimmed it by after, this was all done in one heady go, so feel free to point out anything off.