I don't like this part much, mainly that you're trying to set up some Yamataians being hostile against other Yamataians as a culture, whereas Yamatai as a whole is relatively racism-free (especially compared to Nepleslia). Even the synths vs natural humans thing (species restriction act etc) is usually just about human limitations.Tatiana dos not have much in the way of a Nekovalkyrja population outside of the military. In fact, much of the world's population is rather hostile toward the few Neko civilians, leading to no small amount of dissent in the people. This has only grown dramatically after being released from their occupation, requiring the Legion's deployment nearby. However, even prior this level of dissent was rarely more then people's grumbling.
Enhance your literacy, please. I really, really want to get people to stop making this mistake.Tatiana has it's own farms
How would they possibly get away with this? Nekos can kick their asses either physically or legally.it is a common sight to see stones and slurs thrown at Nekos and their homes. As a result, it isn't considered a very safe place to live for them
After being founded, Legion VII was semi-permanently stationed on the planet for defense and policing purposes.
Amazingly, Tatiana didn't suffer to harshly under prolonged occupation, agreeing to supply the enemy forces with planet-made food and supplies for some degree of safety.
n fact, much of the world's population is rather hostile toward the few Neko civilians, leading to no small amount of dissent in the people. This has only grown dramatically after being released from their occupation, requiring the Legion's deployment nearby. However, even prior this level of dissent was rarely more then people's grumbling.
In addition, Tatiana has its own farms, operating on a substantive farming philosophy.
On a planet as snugly populated as Tatiana, government is a relatively easy process to identify with; Everything within a city falls under individual municipal department head or mayor, while everything beyond that falls under the world's governor, who resides in the Valhalla's spire building. The Governor, of course, heeds then heads the empire.
There are also many major cities about Tatiana, as well as towns and villages.
Tatiana is a extremely planned colony, taking great steps to ensure it remains a beautiful utopia of a planet. This is at the cost of both private construction as well as general time and management. All cities of the plant reside on the same settled continents and are universally the same; Large, disc-like cities that are fairly dense and are a mass of walk ways and light and heavy rail services
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The cities themselves tend to be fairly cramped and noisy, densely constructed to make up for the lack of personal transport. A person's place of work is probably just a short walk away, or a slightly longer ride on the tram. They are very clean, pollution-less facilities, brimming with life and beauty - Flowers and miniature parks are all about each of the disc cities.
There are, however, other centers of civilization on planet, largely illegal. Hostile Refugees, bandits, pirates and so forth. It is possible the Mishhu have a stowaway base or bunker somewhere hidden as well.
Dissent ...
Due to this, as well as the planet's general very mixed, diverse population, it is among one of the planets in the empire that universally adopts a actual paying economy, paying for both goods and services instead of a more simplistic bartering or favor based one like much of the empire, Yamatai in particular, has developed. It gives the planet a very different feel over its neighboring cousins - Not that it isn't rife with its own unique qualities and issues.
While harrassment towards Neko is fairly common, if only because the very police tend to turn a blind eye to it, other sorts of crimes in cities are rather tempered.
(Think New York City, here!)
Post-occupation, the planet's aether generators were reinstalled, though they remain unused except when absolutely required, such as critical emergencies or the like.
Mishhu could never safely commit troops to land and enslave the planet's occupants, instead giving them a curiously unmolested life style.
You don't mention any of these. When we say stuff like this, why not just write a bunch of short blurbs like planet Yamatai's article that actually detail these? If you'd like help, I'd be more than happy to really get into fleshing out a bunch of cities and towns.
I feel this should be described better. There is no way this economy would work and it really seems more like a novelty for tourists, or something. Yamatai is a (generally) post-scarcity society that provides a lot for its citizens. What the Empire has found scarce lately is food. If Tatiana is as big an agricultural place as this update says, then the planet should command a strong position within the Empire's economy (however the damn thing works) as an important asset.
Aether is perfectly clean energy (at least for the canon overworld universe!). Tatianii citizens like nature. They aren't luddites.
Gamerofthegame said:Revolver, feel free to make as much comments, requests for edits and so on as I've said to Raz. Tatiana was originally mine, made it this way and so on, as I've said. However, I was kind of under the impression that no one was attached to the world now, specifically. My fault, oh well.
Aside from the grammar issue, I was thinking it would be more realistic to say roads are limited to in and around the cities. Roads are important for moving cargo from the spaceports to businesses and such.There is no roads
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