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The submitted article is/has…
[ Yes ] A very high level of overall quality
[ Yes ] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ Yes ] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[ Yes ] Needed and/or useful to the setting
Akemi's Umbrella is stated to be a megacorp of sorts...so why not.
[ Yes ] In the proper format/template [ Yes ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
Facilities: "...does spill over to other of Akemi's Stations. There are music production facilities now built at every one of his installed stations."
Fix: "...does spill over to other stations owned by Akemi's Umbrella, each station having new music production facilities installed."
This sentence could probably be even more refined, but it's a bit of a moot matter to go any further.
[ Yes ] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[ Yes ] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[ Yes ] No red and/or broken links
[ Yes ] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[ Yes ] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not… [ No ] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[ No ] Obtusely redundant
[ No ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[ No ] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[ No ] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[ No ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[ No ] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[ No ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ No ] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ No ] Lacking Detail
[ No ] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[ N/A ] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[ N/A ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ N/A ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ N/A ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Summary
Literally just those two sentence structure issues. A bit too present tense for the latter one, a bit too...clunky for the former.