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Approved Character Tereane, Elisto

Kyle

Kyle

Insane Story Writer Foxy
Inactive Member
Pilot Character being made for the Nashoba's 21st Fighting Diamonds.

Tereane Elisto

I'm hoping that the history is defined enough to account for his skill set, however, if you feel there are things I need to change or clarify, just let me know please. Also, his rank is something I asked Nash about and was told it was alright.

I wanted to add his medical skill, but due to the limit of seven skills, I can't really add that. The same applies to his leadership, but that was more because I remember reading that new soldiers shouldn't have that skill right away, so I kept it out as well.
 
I'll look at this later in detail.

But its the 21st Squadron - Fighting Diamonds

:lol:
 
Silic can relax. There is no Intel person assigned to the 21st. Yamamoto Nobutora was, but then the player had problems and hasn't come back to the plot.

So right now the Intel Officer for the Heitan is with the group. Which is someone your character once approved will have to deal with. :)

Besides, its good for Silic to have two sets of eyes watching him.

I will review this when I get home from work.
 
Np Nash :)

Made some updates to the bio:

Added details about the tattoos
Made corrections to spelling errors
Added name to police carrier (Not class though)
Fixed wiki code a bit <_<
 
A few problems with the history.

While colorful, there has never been Police Fighters. Sorry.

joined up with an interstellar police agency that handled work outside of the lawful territories of the Yamataian Empire, his craving for adventure and danger pushing him along.

His youthful determination landed him a spot on a squadron of fighters attached to the police carrier, YSS Kaiten.
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Ok, History updated. Changed Fighter to a gunship. (I figure it's a police varient, not the military kind of course)
If that is still a problem, please let me know :)
 
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