Gossamar
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Character Article URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:maraea_morgan
Preferred Plot's GM: @Semjax
Looking forward!
Preferred Plot's GM: @Semjax
Looking forward!
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Approved Character [The Black Vipers] Maraea Morgan
- Thread starter Gossamar
- Start date
Alrighty.
First of all, welcome to the Website, and thank you for taking an interest in The Black Vipers plot! I will gladly accept you into the fold, first though:
I see you are Twenty, my plot is an 18+ plot so you have the correct age range, so I'll need you to contact @Wes for what you need next if you haven't already.
With that... The first thing I noticed that'll be an issue when @Wes @Aendri @Kyle or one of the other character reviewers look over your character page is that we don't allow 3rd party image hosting (Such as Imgur or Photobucket or Image Shack) this is because the website is more like a permanent dictionary and those places don't always keep pictures. Second of all, is that picture one that belongs to you? Or one you found on the internet? Cause if its the latter then its an issue of copyright cause any pictures placed on the page is immediately property of Star Army through copyright. If you don't own the picture, then you can put anonymous art by using this coding: {{character:anonymous:anonymous_female.png}}. If you do own the art, and have no problem with Star Army owning the picture for dictionary like purposes you can upload it to the Wiki -itself- by pressing the Add Image button when altering your character page.
Something some of the more picky people will note on your character is that you joined the Nepleslian Military at 16, Nepleslia wasn't its own faction until YE28, Your character is 36 Years old that makes her birth year YE 1, YE 17 would be the year you joined the Military. The Nepleslian Military was, at that point, Part of the Star Army of Yamatai. Its a small thing, but something pickier people will pick out and ask for you to change it to the Star Army.
Outside of that your history looks good enough to me.
Skills look good too, except for one thing: Specialty: Marine Doctor would basically be the 'Medical and Science' Skill instead of a specialty skill.
Finally, you have no inventory, you'll need to buy your inventory with your starting funds. If you need help with that anyone on IRC can help you, including me.
I think the character is overall great, and will be more than welcomed into The Black Vipers, but fix those things and post here and I'll hand you off to either @Wes @Aendri or @Kyle !
First of all, welcome to the Website, and thank you for taking an interest in The Black Vipers plot! I will gladly accept you into the fold, first though:
I see you are Twenty, my plot is an 18+ plot so you have the correct age range, so I'll need you to contact @Wes for what you need next if you haven't already.
With that... The first thing I noticed that'll be an issue when @Wes @Aendri @Kyle or one of the other character reviewers look over your character page is that we don't allow 3rd party image hosting (Such as Imgur or Photobucket or Image Shack) this is because the website is more like a permanent dictionary and those places don't always keep pictures. Second of all, is that picture one that belongs to you? Or one you found on the internet? Cause if its the latter then its an issue of copyright cause any pictures placed on the page is immediately property of Star Army through copyright. If you don't own the picture, then you can put anonymous art by using this coding: {{character:anonymous:anonymous_female.png}}. If you do own the art, and have no problem with Star Army owning the picture for dictionary like purposes you can upload it to the Wiki -itself- by pressing the Add Image button when altering your character page.
Something some of the more picky people will note on your character is that you joined the Nepleslian Military at 16, Nepleslia wasn't its own faction until YE28, Your character is 36 Years old that makes her birth year YE 1, YE 17 would be the year you joined the Military. The Nepleslian Military was, at that point, Part of the Star Army of Yamatai. Its a small thing, but something pickier people will pick out and ask for you to change it to the Star Army.
Outside of that your history looks good enough to me.
Skills look good too, except for one thing: Specialty: Marine Doctor would basically be the 'Medical and Science' Skill instead of a specialty skill.
Finally, you have no inventory, you'll need to buy your inventory with your starting funds. If you need help with that anyone on IRC can help you, including me.
I think the character is overall great, and will be more than welcomed into The Black Vipers, but fix those things and post here and I'll hand you off to either @Wes @Aendri or @Kyle !
