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Faction: Iromakuanhe
FM Approved Yet? No
Faction requires art? No
For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No
Notes:
Ty @Gunsight1 for the art! This ship is going to be used in @Zack's 188604 plot! Couldn't have been done without @Perilous Siege! Thanks @CadetNewb for steering me around the Mishhu issue! @Wes thanks for running the site! Thanks @Doshii Jun, as well, if you review it, too! Thanks to @Soresu for your past and possibly future thoughts on it.
No, the International Relations Conference was in 936.
As for the other, I'll look into it.
[Edit: Edited to reflect that the IRC was in YE 34. I changed it to reflect the correct information, as I was basing mine off of an old forum post and not the wiki.]
I'm getting into it some, but the couple things I see at the get-go:
What is the ship? Is it a corvette? A frigate? Where did it come from? How did it land in private hands? Are there more of the model?
Some of these things are good to answer in "Background and History," but the initial question and its plot information could be stated in a lead paragraph, which you do not have right now. This graf goes above the art.
It already said stealth frigate in statistical data.
Sorry about the absence of a lead paragraph. I should have known better. I was just a tad excited to have the artwork stand center-stage. That first graf has been added, though, and should clear up your questions.
Please don't used forced line breaks in wiki articles. Can you replace most of these with bullet lists? I helped by doing this for the speed section, for an example. Also try to put at least a little actual text after each section == header == (all sections are supposed to have some text).
Hopefully I made all of the appropriate changes. Instead of creating bulleted lists I took out the \\ and it worked out just fine, I hope that is still okay. I added text after every header (unless I missed one or two) even in cases where I questioned if it needed it, I went ahead and did so, anyway.