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Approved Character [The Wayward] Quinn Cathal

Alright well let's see. Well he seems kind of light for his height, I mean Shaq is 7'1" and 325 so that puts this guy nearly 100 lbs lighter, I'm not sure if his build description and his weight would match up. I don't really see any problems with his history, though I'm by no means a master of SARP History. As for skills, you have only 6, you can have 7, so if you want yeah, go ahead and add computer skills in. Lastly the inventory, you want to put links to each item that has a wiki page on your inventory, that makes it easier reference for players as well as for you.
 
I've fixed the wiki links for you guys. Syaoran, remember that new players are probably unfamiliar with the wiki. Let's try to help them out.

History issues: I suggest changing it so he was born on Nepleslia, since Vandenburg wasn't colonized until at least YE 30 (it's YE 36 now, about to be YE 37) since that was when the Nepleslian colonial expansion occurred. His family could have moved to Vandenburg in YE 30 or afterward.
 
@Wes Thank you for editing in the links. I was going to do that and then had to run off to go to a movie with my family. I didn't exactly take into account his age and the time Vandenburg was colonized so I've fixed that.
@Syaoran Fixed his weight to be (quite) a bit heavier and tacked on the computer skill. Also tacked on his guitar as far as misc. personal items go.

I think that's it if no one sees anything else that needs to be changed?
 
No issues here.
 
Moved to approved.
 
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