Alright well let's see. Well he seems kind of light for his height, I mean Shaq is 7'1" and 325 so that puts this guy nearly 100 lbs lighter, I'm not sure if his build description and his weight would match up. I don't really see any problems with his history, though I'm by no means a master of SARP History. As for skills, you have only 6, you can have 7, so if you want yeah, go ahead and add computer skills in. Lastly the inventory, you want to put links to each item that has a wiki page on your inventory, that makes it easier reference for players as well as for you.