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Approved Character To: Star Army Intelligence (Character Bio)

Have you been watching Darker Than Black? This reads kind of like a bio of a Contractor, minus the supernatural abilities.

I won't be doing a full review of this character because I don't think I can approve it, but what I read looks pretty good.

Could Another reviewer please step in and give this character a full review?
 
Essentially, the entire bio is written in IC. It needs to be OOC — that means you do not hold things back. If you need to, state clearly in the bio what is known ICly.
 
After taking a suggestion from Nashoba, I've rewritten Doppel's character sheet and added a separate page about known info for her.
 
Approved, Please make sure to update the Known page as information is learned, it would also be appropriate for some mis-information to be added eventually to that page.

Approved
 
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