Approved Submission Tokyo Fresh Markets

[Andrew]

Submission RP Example

https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/threads/grand-opening-of-kumo-no-kagayaki-station-cloudport-open-rp.70980/#post-441727

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:yugumo_corporation:komorebi_foods:tokyo_fresh_markets

Submission Faction(s)

1. Yamatai (except Elysia)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Grocery Stores!

 

[Wes]

There's a few usages of "you" in this article that I was wondering if you could change to something else because in general the Star Army wiki only uses "you" when specifically talking to the player in OOC and the wiki is kind of written in IC style. Perhaps you could say "One can find" instead of "you can find" and so on. Thoughts?

 

[Andrew]

Fixed

 

[Wes]

Approved! Thanks for making something Star Army severely needed! We got so many guns but not a lot of places for characters to get meal supplies.