Site policy is New players start at the bottom of the ranks. This rule has been in force since before I joined last year.
In most cases, a character rank does not control what position the character can hold. So even as a Peacekeeper Recruit you could put her in whatever ship position.
As for the character itself:
Description is lacking details, for example, how long is her hair? how does she wear it?
Skin pale? Pale what? Pale Pink, Blue, etc
Facial and eye Asian-look with Green, Asian-look? Lumping all Asian people into one look, seriously?