Tranquility-class Diplomacy Ship

[Toshiro]

I have a UOCPF ship + subsystems (from MFY) to submit, as well as a Civilian KFY vessel to submit. Here is the KFY civvy ship.


https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=st ... omacy_ship

 

[Wes]

The Upper level contains lesser stations, as well as keeps difficult VIPs from reaching the Captain should they insist on interfering with her duties.

How?

Captain's Suite

Sleeping one or two (three if VERY friendly), these rooms are just like the VIP rooms, even having their own bathroom. Each has a widened bed, a viewscreen (by default, set to view the space outside via a sensor on the hull, a terminal to do work, a communications line only accessible by the Captain, a desk, two comfortable chairs, a closet, a dresser, and a shelf for possessions. There is also a standard power and data outlet.

How many are there? The description is plural but the title is not.

In spite of the nodal system, uniforms still need to be kept crisp and fresh.

The nodal system isn't for cleaning -- and this ship doesn't even have it.

These sensors are 2.5 times the power of even military grade sensors

But doesn't the military already have the best sensors technologically available?

Stargazer Lounge

This ornate two-deck location is where the Crew and VIPs can both elect to meet, eat, or just relax. Formal attire and proper manners are required if VIPs are present, however.

It has a full view of space on three of its walls, fed by sensors outside the ship’s hull, and each seat is cushioned, with adjustable back, armrests, and height.

More description on this? It's kind of bare.

Sure, the nodal system can take care of cleanliness, but can they crease your clothing for you?

Again, a reference to a system not on the ship.

These safes are used by the VIPS for their more important items or personal effects, and are each made of meter-thick walls of Yamataium.

What can they fit inside, with walls so insanely thick? Also, why are the walls so thick? They're six times as thick as the HULL of a Plumeria gunship!

 

[Toshiro]

The Upper level contains lesser stations, as well as keeps difficult VIPs from reaching the Captain should they insist on interfering with her duties.

How?

Appended. The people on the upper level are meant to keep the VIPs from reaching the CO and interrupting her current responsibilities. They act as liaisons if absolutely necessary.

Captain's Suite

Sleeping one or two (three if VERY friendly), these rooms are just like the VIP rooms, even having their own bathroom. Each has a widened bed, a view screen (by default, set to view the space outside via a sensor on the hull, a terminal to do work, a communications line only accessible by the Captain, a desk, two comfortable chairs, a closet, a dresser, and a shelf for possessions. There is also a standard power and data outlet.

How many are there? The description is plural but the title is not.

There's one such suite. I was originally planning two, but threw out the other one, hence the plural remnant.

In spite of the nodal system, uniforms still need to be kept crisp and fresh.

The nodal system isn't for cleaning -- and this ship doesn't even have it.

Fixed

These sensors are 2.5 times the power of even military grade sensors

But doesn't the military already have the best sensors technologically available?

Changed to say they are equal to military-grade.

Stargazer Lounge

This ornate two-deck location is where the Crew and VIPs can both elect to meet, eat, or just relax. Formal attire and proper manners are required if VIPs are present, however.

It has a full view of space on three of its walls, fed by sensors outside the ship’s hull, and each seat is cushioned, with adjustable back, armrests, and height.

More description on this? It's kind of bare.

Well, I was thinking this could vary by who owned the ship, and am unsure of what to put in here other than this. Any suggestions?

Sure, the nodal system can take care of cleanliness, but can they crease your clothing for you?

Again, a reference to a system not on the ship.

Fixed.

These safes are used by the VIPS for their more important items or personal effects, and are each made of meter-thick walls of Yamataium.

What can they fit inside, with walls so insanely thick? Also, why are the walls so thick? They're six times as thick as the HULL of a Plumeria gunship!

Changed to 5 cm thick, 30cm x 30cm x 30cm dimensions.

 

[Wes]

Well, I was thinking this could vary by who owned the ship, and am unsure of what to put in here other than this. Any suggestions?

Putting that it varies is fine. I did the same thing with the space yacht. Alternatively, you could put that it varies and come up with an example.

 

[Toshiro]

Added the following:

The room is customizable by the CO's or organization's tastes. The first ship of the line, for example, used multi colored blue and white carpeting, with the tables and chairs on raised platforms. A stage was placed at the rear of both areas, so that musical groups or speakers could play on each level. The room was very finely tuned acoustically for this purpose, and had speakers hidden in strategic locations across the room, as well as the ability to isolate the sounds of one room from the other, and vice versa. Eight crystalline chandeliers roughly 3 meters in diameter each grace the combined two floors of the Stargazer Lounge. Any walls in the room were actually color changeable upon request, to suit the needs of the occasion. Examples include white for weddings, platinum for coronations or formal meetings of state, black for funerals of state or other purpose of mourning, and sky blue or maroon for most other uses.

 

[Wes]

SUBMISSION APPROVED