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Tranquility-class Diplomacy Ship

The Upper level contains lesser stations, as well as keeps difficult VIPs from reaching the Captain should they insist on interfering with her duties.
How?

How many are there? The description is plural but the title is not.

In spite of the nodal system, uniforms still need to be kept crisp and fresh.
The nodal system isn't for cleaning -- and this ship doesn't even have it.

These sensors are 2.5 times the power of even military grade sensors
But doesn't the military already have the best sensors technologically available?

More description on this? It's kind of bare.

Sure, the nodal system can take care of cleanliness, but can they crease your clothing for you?
Again, a reference to a system not on the ship.

These safes are used by the VIPS for their more important items or personal effects, and are each made of meter-thick walls of Yamataium.
What can they fit inside, with walls so insanely thick? Also, why are the walls so thick? They're six times as thick as the HULL of a Plumeria gunship!
 

Appended. The people on the upper level are meant to keep the VIPs from reaching the CO and interrupting her current responsibilities. They act as liaisons if absolutely necessary.



There's one such suite. I was originally planning two, but threw out the other one, hence the plural remnant.

In spite of the nodal system, uniforms still need to be kept crisp and fresh.
The nodal system isn't for cleaning -- and this ship doesn't even have it.

Fixed

These sensors are 2.5 times the power of even military grade sensors
But doesn't the military already have the best sensors technologically available?

Changed to say they are equal to military-grade.


Well, I was thinking this could vary by who owned the ship, and am unsure of what to put in here other than this. Any suggestions?

Sure, the nodal system can take care of cleanliness, but can they crease your clothing for you?
Again, a reference to a system not on the ship.

Fixed.


Changed to 5 cm thick, 30cm x 30cm x 30cm dimensions.
 
Well, I was thinking this could vary by who owned the ship, and am unsure of what to put in here other than this. Any suggestions?
Putting that it varies is fine. I did the same thing with the space yacht. Alternatively, you could put that it varies and come up with an example.
 
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