Approved Character Tsubei Kyoka

[Moogle]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... n_roleplay

Third character. Sha-bam.

 

[Nashoba]

What occupation? And you say she is 1 year and 3 months old, but in your history you say she was made specifically for the Aeon, and trained for two years. But the Aeon has only been launched for coming up on one year.

Because this character is intended for the Aeon, I am going to let one of the other mods take care of it.

 

[Moogle]

Whoops. . . Sorry about that. I made the character with the intention of training for two years but then changed it at last minute. I'll get to that.


Edit: Fixed both problems. I think.

 

[Wes]

I'll take a look at her. Let's see...

- User page doesn't exist yet, leaving the dreaded "red link" on the bio.
- "1 and three months." (insert "year" so it makes sense)
- Occupation not listed
- "Black Neko ears." black fur or skin?
- Overall physical description is very minimal
- Can't train for 2 years if she's not even two years old. Also, max training for a neko is 1 year.
- Skills: "Your character" needs replacement.
- Inventory needs tweaking to remove male only items

 

[Moogle]

Wow. One minute after my post. Anyways, I've addressed the problems. I think.

 

[Doshii Jun]

You have been a member of the SARP for less than a week. The rules say you can have as many characters as you want, as long as each is in a different plot. You've satisfied that rule ... but you've hardly RP'd at all and you're really rushing into the setting.

I can't stop you, but are you sure you don't want to move a little more slowly? To make sure you can equally focus on your characters?

 

[Moogle]

. . . . Yeah. Probably. Might as well put this gal on hold for a month or two. But otherwise, this character is approved?

 

[Wes]

I really think Brian should approve this character, since it's for his plot.

 

[Nashoba]

Approved,
Character still has to go through the prerequisite interview.

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