Approved Character Tuija Seppanen

[Lin]

Whelp, Plaid demanded I make an indie pirate, so here's an indie pirate.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:tuija_seppanen

 

[PlaidMage]

MY DEMANDS ARE SATISFIED

also i already looked it over and it's pretty good, i approve

 

[Nashoba]

Independant is misspelled should be Independent

How long is Tuija's hair? You never give a definitely description of its length.

Can you provide some more details about the blatantly cybernetic eyes
I mean are they silver? or do they glow red like a terminator, what makes them so blatant.

History is very sparce, doesn't really say what she has been doing prior to this plot.

competant is misspelled should be competent (2 places)

Might want to flesh out her inventory a bit, clothing she has a sweater, a frumpy skirt, a trenchcoat, so she doesn't have any kind of footwear, no underwear.

Character is still pending approval

 

[Lin]

I fixed up the spelling, description, and inventory. I left the history as is because she really hasn't been doing anything before this plot. She's a starting PC; practically by definition, she hasn't done anything interesting.

 

[Doshii Jun]

I'm not seeing any more issues here, so we'll say this character is approved for IC usage.