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Approved Submission Type 43 Star Army Science Pad and Kit

Andrew

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Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=stararmy:equipment:science_pad_and_kit_type_43
Submission Faction(s)
  1. Yamatai (except Elysia)
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
A Replacement for the Type 31 Science Kit and Handheld Scanner

 
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The first sentence under 'The Kit Case' reads a little strangely to me and I'm not sure how best to reword it. Can you take a look?

Under Nodal Capsule Sphere, you mention a small aether supply unit. I don't think there are any aether generators smaller than a lunchbox, but I could be mistaken. Is it more of a battery?
 
  1. Reworded.
  2. Detailed that it is a capacitor aka battery.
 
[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and the article template. Is all the information for struct present?
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section.
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved!
 
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