Art will probably be done before I finish with the review and there is concept art now to give this reviewer a good sense of what she's supposed to be imagining, so I'll start now.
"Onboard Systems Descriptions
NEEDS TEXT HERE
Sensors"
Onboard Systems Descriptions need more filled out. One or two lines is not the standard. Beef it up.
I wouldn't use the word "stuff" in an article.
So does it
have to be laying down in order to transform into a tank?
"The Main gun..." (Don't need to capitalize this)
"...to it's light..." (its not it's)
Seems to be closer to T7
size-wise.
"Skimming: 120 KPH" (You're going to have to explain. Does that mean when in tank form?)
"There are four displays, two on the left and right that show views to either sides of the mecha, one main screen that shows the front view, and a small display above the main one that shows a rear view." (These likely change when it is in two different forms, right? Might want to mention that.)
"Weapons Systems
NEED TEXT HERE
Built in Autocannons"
Will do DR for weapons once we figure out tier.
Nice going making another neato mecha, duderino! Can't wait to see it in RP after we make some changes and hammer out the details.