Approved Submission U7B Command Craft

Looks p. cool overall ovob

Ship Systems
TEXT/PROSE
Armor and Hull composition: Durandium Alloy

Weapons should be in this format:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=guide:damage_rating_v3#weapons

Nice

I don’t mean to be rude, @Zack, but shouldn’t a command ship have power generators, communication devices, sensor arrays, and barrier generators?

Looks like I just have to list 'purpose' and not a DR tier? That works since the weapon system can launch a bunch of different ammo types.

Either way, updated.

It does not follow the template I provided from DRv3 at all. Please link weapons correctly.

This needs changing:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:u7b#weapons

Balls, I was looking at the one below that. It has been switched to purpose , weapon name now.

This review is for: U7B with URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:u7b

The submitted article is/has…
[✔ ] A very high level of overall quality
[✔ ] A general topic sentence under the title header
[✔ ] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
[✔ ] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[✔ ] In the proper format/template
[✔ ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[✔ ] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[NO] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[✔ ] No red and/or broken links
[✔ ] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[✔ ] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[✔ ] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[✔ ] Obtusely redundant
[✔ ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[✔ ] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[✔ ] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[✔ ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[✔ ] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[✔ ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[✔ ] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[✔ ] Lacking Detail
[✔ ] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[✔ ] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[✔ ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[NO ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[✔ ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.

Notes:
Add links and IC production year.

Bah, I'm usually so good about putting in the year.

The requested updates have been made.