Approved Submission Unicorn custom Variable mecha

[Alex Hart]

Submission Type: Custom mecha/fighter
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:uso:u-1_unicorn_custom

Faction: USO
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) yes
Faction requires art? (Yes/No) no

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) no
Contains New art? (Yes/No) no
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) no

Notes:
This is Alex's custom U-1, the super prototype. Its got a few tricks up its sleeve that normal ones don't.

@Ametheliana

 

[Wes]

In the hardpoints section, could you please replace the forced line breaks with a bullet list?

 

[Alex Hart]

Thanks for the input. I also spotted some things I needed to change in there when you reminded me to go back. I had to make note that some hardpoints were used up by the built in weapons, and that the tail is no longer forked by default.

 

[Alex Hart]

@Ametheliana or anyone else? Bump?

 

[Ametheliana]

I didn't know if @Wes was going for this.

 

[Ira]

Hey. Maybe this is nit picky. But, the information states the height of the machine in mecha form is 12.5 meters. But it only appears to be twice as tall as the dude in its image.

 

[Alex Hart]

Alex is standing on a platform closer to the viewer than the Unicorn is.

 

[Ametheliana]

I had this same problem with getting mecha art! *sighs deeply*

 

[Alex Hart]

IKR. The feet/legs are also way to angular, and the feet were supposed to be clamshell style ;-;

 

[Ametheliana]

Where does its armor get regenerative properties?

"Where the U-1 is adaptable to many situations, the Unicorn is more combat oriented..." When I read that, I thought to myself that I probably wouldn't be seeing something like the cargo module on board. What makes it more combat oriented if it has the cargo module?

Replace Alex's name with "the pilot" in the Power Balancing System and Limiter section.

I still think that T 7 is right.

For this picture, code it as follows or something close:

{{:faction:uso:u-1_mecha_comparison.png?400|U-1 in comparison to other mecha and power armor of SARP}}

 

[Alex Hart]

I don't remember putting regenerative stuff in there, and as for size, its almost twice as large as a Ravager, which is t8.

 

[Alex Hart]

@Ametheliana you said you would get back to this, and its larger than another t8 mecha, so I think the rating is justified.

 

[Zack]

What other mecha is smaller than this and Tier 8? It sounds like that mecha has been improperly classified.

 

[Ametheliana]

T7 works, T8 does not.

 

[Alex Hart]

Changed. Any other outstanding errors?

 

[Ametheliana]

Approved