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[Update] Lorath TATC-0002

This review is for: TATC 0002 Transport

The submitted article is/has…
[ ] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ ] Artwork (illustrations are strongly encouraged for all spacecraft and handheld items)
[x] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[x] In the proper format/template
[x] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[x] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[x] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[x] No red and/or broken links
[x] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[x] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[ ] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[ ] Obtusely redundant
[ ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[ ] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[ ] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[ ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[ ] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[ ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ ] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ ] Lacking Detail
[ ] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)

The article has…
[x] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[x] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[x] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[x] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.


Summary
Note here if any serious issues are present. These are the issues that will hold up approval.
** Short description of the issue. If a longer explanation is needed, put it in Notes.

Status: , Pending[/color
-Needs the ‘general topic sentence’
-Needs artwork (even some quick doga job will do)

Notes


I intend to finish this review by: Wednesday
 
I'd say this article is ready to be approved with the current stats.

But first, please take the time to actually put in those new values.
 
You are incorrect. Art is required for submissions and updates like this. It can not be approved without artwork.
 
So in other words, because he posted the new statistics as submission rather than change them secretly, Doc may no longer use this article in his RP? It was mandatory that the numbers be fixed eventually.

Why penalize him?
 
Because updates are intended to bring things in line with the new rules, this includes making sure that older submissions are still of high enough quality to warrant being on the site.

That was the jist of Wes's reply when I asked him about this back in April.
 
I'm going to grandfather this article on the basis that it was approved with art in the past. But on the basis that site standards require that all starships have art, I'm going to have to ask you to eventually produce something for this page.

This article is approved for IC usage.
 
It also needs the overview blurb under the title header, too.
 
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