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[Update] M2 Assault Rifle

Sigma

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Submission Type: Military
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=nepleslia:m2_assault_rifle

Faction: Nepleslia
FM Approved Yet? Yes, today

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes, the 6.8mm round, which is a separate article.
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:
I drew some inspiration for the weapon from the SA-80, SAR 21 and TAR-21. Though, this is not a bullpup rifle. Lengths are approximate to the M4 CQBR.


Changes
- 6.8x43mm round from the previous 5.45mm ball round
- Added new description & history
- Formatted for new template somewhat. Forcing an old article into the new template is difficult enough.
- Expanded textual appearance
- Range increased ; Muzzle flash rewritten to make sense
- Damage Chart added for all three rounds, though description fluff is important
- Weapon sights reworked
- Added carrying capacity since that was neither in the original nor the template
- Optional stuff added
- Added pricing even though this isn't for sale outside the SMDIoN
 
An assault rifle intended to replace the M1V and currently in use by IPG forces
Please change this into a complete sentence.

The round used says it's unapproved.

Everything else looks good, although it would be nice if you could mention something about how the recoil feels and give a more detailed description of the sounds it makes (for RP description purposes).
 
The round is also in the NTSE pending approval... I posted it yesterday. NTSE mods haven't touch it since Doshii posted.

Added the recoil, expanded the sounds. Template didn't have anything about recoil.
 
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