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Approved Submission Ursarus Primarus

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I will take a look at this one, so I will assign it to me. Offhand, while I take a look, the first thing I can point out is that you need to take some time to fix some formatting. There are spacing issues and minor grammar errors.

examples of formatting/spacing errors. There are others, I just wanted to show you what I mean.

Give me a day or two and I will get a full review up for you. I just want some time to go over it.


 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

I don't see any other major issues with this, looks like it meshes with the previously connected submissions. Approved.
 
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