You need to have text under the title header, where the WIP banner is currently. Two sentences to a paragraph's worth introducing the tech.
History section is necessary for this guy. I want to know everything about the tech's creation, why it was produced, how it was designed, etc.
The main title needs every new word, save for itty bitty words, to have the first word capitalized.
"The energy to matter conversion system can be used in many different capacities, including..." This needs a colon at the end of it or you need to finish the sentence with something like "...the following uses."
If this is going to be sold, which it really seems it will be, I want a price on it.
This is really weird, you have two of the same page on the wiki. Please delete
the page you are not submitting, unless this is something else entirely and I'm assuming things.
I'd like Wes' opinion, as well.