Approved Submission [Valsh'Nar Empire] Military

[Riko]

Submission Type: Military structure as well as ranks and special forces description for VNE
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=valsh_nar-empire:military

Faction: Valsh'Nar Empire
FM Approved Yet? No
Faction requires art? would like some eventually

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? no
Previously Submitted? no

Notes: a lot of the weapons ships etc are still under constuction, when those are done I will more than likely submit them as there own tech.

 

[Doshii Jun]

The structure appears simplistic, but serviceable. Again, however, you lack backlinking. Please address that.

 

[Riko]

responding to this much like the other one, will put in back linking.

 

[Riko]

Aside from the weapons and armor that needs to be created, I have fixed it up a bit for review again.

 

[Doshii Jun]

I think the concept is OK. Did you want the weapons and armor created before I approve this?

 

[Riko]

I have a page for weapons and such worked up I have the basics done, I need to go though and make pages for the stuff I have put on there that I haven't gotten around to fleshing out yet. I have put the link here for reference.

As for approving, I would rather have this done then I can go through and submit the weapons page as a whole/individual weapons once it gets fleshed out.


https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=valsh_nar-empire:weapons

 

[Doshii Jun]

Understood.

This submission is approved for IC usage.

 

[Riko]

Awesome sauce, hate to be picky but can this thread get moved to the Completed/Approved section seeing as it is completed? Unless I am mistaken that is.