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Preferred Plot's GM: Exhack
Preferred Plot's GM: Exhack
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Approved Character Van Cronovis
- Thread starter akallas
- Start date
Sigma
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Aendri
Inactive Member
Re: [Bahram Wings] Van Cronovis
You might want to look into other plots on the whole. The new Iroma plot is a ways off, and won't be moving very fast for a while yet, I suspect.
And realistically, Iroma don't have much of a presence outside of their plots at the FM's choice, so it might be a good idea to look into other possibilities for the character itself, at least for the time being. When the Iroma plot gets up and running, it might make sense, but for now other races will have more options.
You might want to look into other plots on the whole. The new Iroma plot is a ways off, and won't be moving very fast for a while yet, I suspect.
And realistically, Iroma don't have much of a presence outside of their plots at the FM's choice, so it might be a good idea to look into other possibilities for the character itself, at least for the time being. When the Iroma plot gets up and running, it might make sense, but for now other races will have more options.
Exhack
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Oookay, had a look.
Initial thoughts are that it's creative and well thought out, although there are some problems. I'll go over them step by step.
The very first is the chemical accident, which is strange because Iromakuanhe biotechnology is literally abundant and ubiquitous enough that the proceedures to restore or even upgrade his body would have been standard and almost trivial- and given the circumstances actually entirely free. An Iromakuanhe with unconventional gender expression isn't a bother, though the seeming permanency of the injuries is problematic given that there are dozens of ways he could have been returned to normal.
I feel slightly bad for telling you the crux of the character's life could have easily been fixed- the paralysis, the chemical burns, all would have been provided for him ostensibly for free.
The other thing is this discussion of the body type, which I'd like to hear more about.
Besides that, there might be problems with Van's body type if it's incompatible with Solanii technologies and requiring special medical knowledge. Iromakuanhe medical officers are trained in dealing with a wide variety of augmentations, but his design being entirely new and proprietary problematizes that.
Initial thoughts are that it's creative and well thought out, although there are some problems. I'll go over them step by step.
The very first is the chemical accident, which is strange because Iromakuanhe biotechnology is literally abundant and ubiquitous enough that the proceedures to restore or even upgrade his body would have been standard and almost trivial- and given the circumstances actually entirely free. An Iromakuanhe with unconventional gender expression isn't a bother, though the seeming permanency of the injuries is problematic given that there are dozens of ways he could have been returned to normal.
I feel slightly bad for telling you the crux of the character's life could have easily been fixed- the paralysis, the chemical burns, all would have been provided for him ostensibly for free.
The other thing is this discussion of the body type, which I'd like to hear more about.
Besides that, there might be problems with Van's body type if it's incompatible with Solanii technologies and requiring special medical knowledge. Iromakuanhe medical officers are trained in dealing with a wide variety of augmentations, but his design being entirely new and proprietary problematizes that.
I looked over the slight error you pointed out in my character's history, so I went changed slight details to suit Iromakuanhe races' background.
Regarding the physiology of my character and compatibility with Solan Starworks tech's.
The body itself was built by one of the scientist that Van contracted with, so I am assuming that the body, while custom in design, would be compatible with the technology. On the other hand, his body is a fully automated machine, complicated as a organic being though, so he is going to require replacements if something happens to disconnect by means internal or external.
Regarding the physiology of my character and compatibility with Solan Starworks tech's.
The body itself was built by one of the scientist that Van contracted with, so I am assuming that the body, while custom in design, would be compatible with the technology. On the other hand, his body is a fully automated machine, complicated as a organic being though, so he is going to require replacements if something happens to disconnect by means internal or external.
I think we should just approve this and see what he can do. It's not cool to have someone wait this long for a decision. This character doesn't appear to be representative of the Iroma faction and isn't for a particular plot so I'll take responsibility for approval and give him my OK. I realize there are some risks involved but that's acceptable.
Approved
Approved
