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Approved Submission VDR-1M

Edto Xar'Sivaree

Lizard Freak!
Inactive Member
Submission Type: Weapon
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:komodo_arms_manufacturing:vdr-1m

Faction: VDTF
FM Approved Yet? Yes
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: This is a high-performance variant of the VDR-1, which is why it is so similar. the VDR-2 will be released with larger changes to the actual weapon. This is a different weapon, though,
 
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I believe we talked about this, so if I'm reversing what I said earlier, I apologize. Seeing the two submissions side-by-side, and especially noting that the same copypasta is used on both submissions, this is not significantly different enough from the VDR-1 to merit its own article. Please fold this into the VDR-1 as a subtype/mod/evolution/what-have-you.

No other problems with it that I can see. I have reviewed this submission in accordance with the Guide for Submission Reviewers.
 
When you're editing the original VDR-1 page, take the content you have in the 1M and slip it under a new 4- or 5-level header. (==== or =====)

Any information on the 1M page that's already on the VDR-1 page can be skipped. This also allows you to avoid having to backlink the VDR-1 to the 1M page. Because you're doing it at my direction, there's no need to resubmit the thread. Just let me know when it's done and I'll review the VDR-1.
 
Please remove all repeated information. Lengths, calibers, extra parts that aren't different from the 1M, etc. Also, when you're ready, delete the original 1M page.
 
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