Approved Submission VDSG-1

[Edto Xar'Sivaree]

Submission Type: Weapon
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:komodo_arms_manufacturing:vdsg-1#weapon_specifications

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:komodo_arms_manufacturing:8_gauge_vd

Faction: VDTF
FM Approved Yet? Yes
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: Threw in the shotgun's ammo in cause like... I guess?

 

[Edto Xar'Sivaree]

Bump

 

[Doshii Jun]

"making this weapon a terror in the CQC battlefield." <-- Please remove this.

Also, please assign v3 ratings for each shell type.

I have reviewed this submission in accordance with the Guide for Submission Reviewers.

 

[Edto Xar'Sivaree]

The shells do have a v3 rating... The descriptions have their Tier Ratings.

Removed "Terror in the CQC battlefield"

 

[Doshii Jun]

Oh, it's all spelled out. OK! Please edit them to make them stand out, and link back to the v3 page.

You can make them stand out by bringing them onto their own line and saying "Light Anti-Personnel," "Light Anti-Armor," etc.

Also, the last sentence in your opening paragraph now is incomplete. You can take out the rest or make it into a complete sentence.

 

[Edto Xar'Sivaree]

Alright, I will make those corrections

 

[Edto Xar'Sivaree]

Changes have been made.

 

[Doshii Jun]

Cleaned it up some. Approved.