Edto Xar'Sivaree Lizard Freak! Inactive Member Feb 2, 2017 #1 Submission Type: Weapon Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:komodo_arms_manufacturing:vdsg-1#weapon_specifications https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:komodo_arms_manufacturing:8_gauge_vd Faction: VDTF FM Approved Yet? Yes Faction requires art? No For Reviewers: Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes Contains New art? Yes Previously Submitted? No Notes: Threw in the shotgun's ammo in cause like... I guess? Upvote 0 Downvote
Submission Type: Weapon Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:komodo_arms_manufacturing:vdsg-1#weapon_specifications https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:komodo_arms_manufacturing:8_gauge_vd Faction: VDTF FM Approved Yet? Yes Faction requires art? No For Reviewers: Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes Contains New art? Yes Previously Submitted? No Notes: Threw in the shotgun's ammo in cause like... I guess?
Doshii Jun Perpetual player Retired Staff Feb 12, 2017 #3 "making this weapon a terror in the CQC battlefield." <-- Please remove this. Also, please assign v3 ratings for each shell type. I have reviewed this submission in accordance with the Guide for Submission Reviewers.
"making this weapon a terror in the CQC battlefield." <-- Please remove this. Also, please assign v3 ratings for each shell type. I have reviewed this submission in accordance with the Guide for Submission Reviewers.
Edto Xar'Sivaree Lizard Freak! Inactive Member Feb 12, 2017 #4 The shells do have a v3 rating... The descriptions have their Tier Ratings. Removed "Terror in the CQC battlefield"
The shells do have a v3 rating... The descriptions have their Tier Ratings. Removed "Terror in the CQC battlefield"
Doshii Jun Perpetual player Retired Staff Feb 12, 2017 #5 Oh, it's all spelled out. OK! Please edit them to make them stand out, and link back to the v3 page. You can make them stand out by bringing them onto their own line and saying "Light Anti-Personnel," "Light Anti-Armor," etc. Also, the last sentence in your opening paragraph now is incomplete. You can take out the rest or make it into a complete sentence.
Oh, it's all spelled out. OK! Please edit them to make them stand out, and link back to the v3 page. You can make them stand out by bringing them onto their own line and saying "Light Anti-Personnel," "Light Anti-Armor," etc. Also, the last sentence in your opening paragraph now is incomplete. You can take out the rest or make it into a complete sentence.
Edto Xar'Sivaree Lizard Freak! Inactive Member Feb 12, 2017 #6 Alright, I will make those corrections