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Approved Character Victor Adair.

Victor Adair

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====== Victor Adair. ======

^ Victor Adair. ^^
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^ Species: | Nepleslian. |
^ Gender: | Male. |
^ Age: | 24. |
^ Zodiac Sign: | Pisces. |
^ Height: | 6' 2.5" |
^ Weight: | 170 pounds. |
^ Bra Size: | N/A. |
^ Organization: | Star Military of the Democratic Imperium of Nepleslia. |
^ Occupation: | Marine Corp, |
^ Rank: | Private 3rd Class (P3C). |
^ Current Placement: | NSS Acadia |

===== Victor Adair. in Roleplay =====
Victor Adair. is a [[layer Characters|Victor Adair]] played by [[user:YOUR NAME HERE]] and is currently involved in the NSS Acadia plot.



===== Physical Characteristics =====
**Height:** 6' 2.5"\\
**Weight:** 170 pounds.\\
**Measurements:** N/A.\\
**Bra Size:** N/A.

**Build and Skin Color:** Victor Adair is a man who rests between being muscular and being rather slim. He has muscles that he has obviously gained for the purpose of hand-to-hand combat if he has to fight that way. He has mocha colored skin that seems to lack any major imperfections such as acne or scars of some kind or another on him.

**Facial Features and Eye Color:** Victor has a slim jaw with slight inset cheeks and he has a thin, pointed nose situated between a dark green eye that seem to be carrying something that a person might identify as compassion for his work and a love of his service in the Star Military. Meanwhile the other 'eye', a cybernetic implant which can oom in and out, and scan certain materials such as food and liquids, holds no signs of emotion or thought in it's dark green lens.

**Hair Color and Style:** Victor has raven black hair that he keeps in a 'soul patch' of sorts on his chin, not exceeding the width of his mouth while the hair atop his head is kept short enough to where it doesn't touch the top of his ears or reach his eyebrows, but not by much, and it is usually shaggy-looking in nature.

**Distinguishing Features:** Besides his cybernetic eye, which appears as simply a dark green lens where his eye would normally be on the left side, is one of the few major distinguishing features of him for anybody who doesn't know him.



===== Psychological Characteristics =====
**Personality:** Victor Adair is a dedicated individual who seems to absolutely love his work in the Corp...but who seems to get restless when he doesn't have anything to do and thus commonly works out in the gym with cardio and toning whenever he isn't on-duty. Besides this he tends to be protective of his fellow Marines, regardless of ranks, and is an overall fun and friendly guy to be around.

**Likes:** Helping people, catching some drinks with his best friends, and he has been seen smoking the occasional cigarillo every now and then.\\
**Dislikes:** Being unassigned, having nothing to do that's exciting, and having to exercise his granted right to punish fellow soldiers for acting violently towards his 'mark' when he is assigned to one.\\
**Goals:** One of his primary goals is to just serve to his maximum, giving up his life for his fellow soldiers if he has to. Besides that he just wants to see his sister, who recently went back to college, be happy.



===== History =====
===Family (or Creators)===
Victor's father, James Adair, was the owner/operator of a small-time shipping company who was rarely ever home and so Victor never really got the chance to become attached or even really know his father that well.

His mother, Laura Adair, was a cook with the Nepleslian Care Corp who was home even less then Victor's father: though she was more attached to her kids with letters, pictures, videos, and other such things.

Julie Adair, Victor's younger sister, was possibly the closest relative he had in his early childhood. They were like a tag-team and took up almost everything together. When Victor joined his school boxing team...his sister joined their womens' boxing team. When Victor took up urban exploration: guess who was following him across the roof-tops.
=== Pre-RP ===
Born February 19, YE 08. He and his family were basically, by pure luck and chance, unaffected physically by the plague that year even if his father's finances suffered from a lack of healthy customers. Even with that lack of major funs, Victor didn't grow up really wanting for anything, and even had a nanny hired by his father to take care of him. \\
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When he turned six he was graced with his baby sister Julie and Victor became extremely protective of his sister. As she grew up and started going to school 'bullies' soon learned to leave the little girl alone or have her upper-classman brother come find them one day after school. She began to look up to him because of it, that and the fact that neither of them got to spend much actual time with their parents, and he became extremely protective of her. \\
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Now one would be asking how Victor had gone and lost his eyes around now, possibly. That comes from when he was seventeen years old and had been going on urban explorations for a while now. His siter, who was only eleven, was still a rather skilled explorer herself and had been coming with him one night when he had dropped in to a rain-soaked alley...that happend to be home to a desperate and armed homeless man. The man made the demand: his sister or his life. Victor was willing to have his life taken and told his sister to run for him. \\
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The man lunged for him and in the tussle the homeless man ended up dead with a broken arm and nose but Victor didn't come out unscathed. The knife was still in the center of his eyes when the paramedics, called by somebody who had seen the happenings within the alley, arrived to see if he was alright. Shortly after that his eye was replaced by the cybernetic replacement...and his life never really was the same after that. \\
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Determined to try and prevent others from being hurt he enlisted in the military.

===== Skills =====
==== Communication. ====
Victor, like all Marines, is familiar with basic radio operation and procedures and can make transmissions to and receive transmissions from others through headsets, ships, ground vehicles, power armor, and shuttles in both combat and non-combat conditions. He is fluent in Nepleslian. He can speak and write it correctly and efficiently and can write reports, fill forms, issue orders under fire, etc. Victor is skilled in field communications and is proficient in all rudimentary forms of communication (hand signals, flashing lights, etc).

==== Fighting. ====
Victor, once again like all other Marines, received intensive hand-to-hand combat training (primarily focused on disabling and/or killing opponents) and has followed up that knowledge with a rigorous training program. Weapons he is trained in include pistols of all types, knives, grenades (and other forms of explosive weaponry) and rifles of all kinds, including some foreign weapons. He is in excellent physical shape and has considerable endurance. He is also able to pilot land-based power armors, but must rely on the suit’s A.I. to do anything advanced.

==== Survival. ====
If you have to be behind enemy lines and on the run then Victor is a man who can help you do that. Need food? He can hunt or scavenge it. Need water? He can find it for you. Victor can you help you survive behind enemy lines and can build and maintain a shelter to keep warm at night. Besides that he is skilled in signal-work if needed and if you find you need to hide in plain sight then he is proficient in camouflage techniques and, if you have to fight too, he knows guerilla warfare as well.

==== Strategy (Tactics / Discipline). ====
Victor can understand and give out tactical commands and work with his troop to follow those commands efficiently. He knows the importance of teamwork on the battlefield, has been intensively trained in discipline and morale, and is able to recognize the command structure even while under extreme pressure (combat, etc). He is able to recognize ambush points as well. He also knows basic math in order to calculate distances, etc, and can use a tactical map.

==== Demlitions. ====
Victor is fully capable of the identification, manufacturing, and handling and disposal of various types of explosives beyond that of the standard training provided to normal Marines. Also, with the proper tools he can detect and disarm hostile explosives as well.

==== Maintenance and Repar. ====
Victor is familiar with and able to fix most problems that occurs within most vehicles and, to some extent, within various systems. While he is not neccesarily extremely well-versed as to how certain parts function and the theories behind each one, he can usually keep most things within their operating parameters if he has the right tools. As a note, however, Victor has only basic experience in this due to his engineer training and is no expert at it by any means. One would be better to go with an engineer dedicated to this field of expertise if they have one available.

===== Finances =====
Victor Adair. is currently a Private 3rd Class (P3C). in the Star Military of the Democratic Imperium of Nepleslia.. He receives a weekly salary of -salary- per week.
^ Total Savings ^ Addition ^ Subtraction ^ Reason ^
| 3000 KS | | | Starting Funds |

===== Inventory =====
==== Clothing ====
- 3x T-shirts, white.
- 3x T-shirts, black.
- 3x Pairs of denim jeans, blue.
- 3x Pairs of socks, white.
- 1x Pair of hiking boots, dark tan.
=== Uniforms ===
- 2x Pullover shirts, green, with rank patches on shoulders and name plate.
- 4x T-shirts, white.
- 4x Pairs of underwear, white.
- 2x Khaki cargo pants.
- 1x Beret, green, with flash patch.
- 1x Pair of gloves, leather, black.
- 1x Pair of boots, black.
- 6x Pairs of boot socks, white.
- 1x Belt, dark brown.
=== Workout Clothing and Undergarments ===
- 2x Short-sleeved mocks with fleet number on right chest, green.
- 2x Pairs of work-out shorts, khaki.
- 1x Pair of trunks with fleet number on right leg, green.
- 2x Tank tops with fleet number on right chest, green.
- 2x Pairs of ankle-length pajama pants, khaki.
- 1x Pair of slip-on flexi-shoes, khaki.
==== Accessories ====
- 1x Pistol belt with .45 holster, black.
- 1x Styrling Silver Special .45 Caliber pistol.
- 2x Extra magazines.
==== Personal Hygiene ====
- 1x Toothbrush, white.
- 1x Tube of toothpaste.
- 1x Comb, green.
- 3x Towels, khaki.
- 1x Soap bar.
- 1x Deodorant bar.
- 1x Single-strap shower bag, green.
==== Electronics ====
- Electronic Money Card.
- 1x AwesomeCorp DataJockey.
==== Miscellaneous ====
- 1x Pair of identification tags with name and hometown, metal.
- 1x Wallet with Marine Corp insignia plate.
- 1x Canteen, 1 quart.

=====OOC Discussion=====
This is my first character and I’m excited to get involved in this. I've been looking at the experienced role players in this forum and I hope that I can contribute to this amazing site.
 
1. In Facial Features: Please remove the part about "compassion for his work and love of his service in the Star Military." That's a Personality point you can include if you like, but it doesn't provide a visual description of anything.

2. Also in FF: He can scan foods and liquids for what? Also, can you describe the eye better, without talking about emotion or thought? Is it a solid green orb, green iris with no pupil, or does it appear to be a lens in front of an empty socket?

3. In History, Family: Nepleslian Care Corps? Did you make that up? It's not bad if you did, but we need to know, as that's a new element to the setting we have to make note of.

4. Also in History, Pre-RP: I find it awesome that the homeless man died with a busted arm and nose. But how did he actually die?

5. In Skills: You've got one more slot available to you, if you want it.

Overall: Well done! A fine new character, with no major tweaks or issues to speak of. Good use of the background material, as well. Work that spellcheck some and you'll be off to the races in no time.

This character is pending. Please address or complete the list of edits above.
 
I'll set to work on all that immediatelly, thank you.

Also, forgive me for the description of the eyes and such: that's just the way I write sometimes.

On another note, I guess I assumed others would know one tactic that an experiened hand-to-hand fighter (or somebody who is really lucky) can use. It involves busting the opponent's nose and basically sending a piece of it in to the person's brain, or so I've been told. That or you could assume he just beat the man to death.

By the Care Corp, I meant one of the Military Corps of the Star Military of the Democratic Imperium of Nepleslia: "Comfort provides a winning warrior." and all that.


Anyways, I'll get to crackin: thank you very much.
 
Looks good to me! You can worry about your last skill later; just let someone know when you fill it.

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