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Approved Character Volker Betruger

This one seems like a rather interesting character; perhaps the Colosseum will start getting quite interesting if we get such a colourful cast there. I like the character, and I don't really see anything wrong with him (though admittedly I'm not an expert on ID-Sol).

(although the wording seems a bit odd to me in the Fighting paragraph.)
 
This character actually seems to be really quite good. He is distinctive, has an unusual personality, and quite a good history.

Is there some reason he only has five skills however? Seven is the amount you could have.
 
Well I only put down 5 skills because I was mimicing Doshii Jun's character. In that one he only has 5 skills listed so I figured I had to keep to that.

I'll wait to see exactly what Wolf wants for the plot he has planned / is planning. But thanks for the comments.
 
His weight seems a bit on the low side. I know you mentioned that he's light weight, but muscles are a lot denser than fat or other human tissue, I believe.

A muscular athelete with low body fat might be considered "overweight" by a weight evaluation system that only considers height and weight (a common complaint against those systems).
 
Since the Colosseum is starting to get a bit more active I came back to smooth over the rougher portions that people like Yangfan pointed out. I changed the weight so that seems more appropriate.

Otherwise let me know if anything else should be changed before he gets approved.
 
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