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Rejected Submission Wheeled Duffel Bag

Samanthia

Samanthia

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I do apologize for not providing a fresh wiki page for this.

Submission Type: Wheeled Duffel
Submission URL: http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb179/Errowyn/SWIFTPAWSDUFFEL_zps86fbaea4.png

Faction: All
FM Approved Yet?
Faction requires art?

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles?:: Article is below cause I am not Wiki-literate to add such pages
Contains New art? yes - modified from original
Previously Submitted? No.

Notes:

Made in the Y36

Only addition to the duffel bag is there is a light weight metal frame inside the bag that connects to wheels and legs in front to keep it level for loading and stationary. Also an expandable (telescoping) handle so it can be pulled behind a person. It is collapsible for storage. It weights several pounds extra. And has the same weather-proofing as the original duffel-bag.

Optional: Duffel Bag Dolly without the Duffe-lbag.

Comes Optional with 1 strap upon request:
1 Strap are there to grab and carry at your side when going up stairs and is adjustable to loop over the neck and rest on one shoulder to carry if needed.

Cost: 50 KS Wheeled Duffel-bag (frame and wheels, support legs and telescoping handle)

cost: 5 KS for carrying strap

cost: 20 KS for Duffel Bag Dolly comes with attaching straps for external usage.

Made by Santo-Hei Swiftpaws, Sheela, of the YSS Aeon and player
 
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If you used the straps to carry it on your back, it looks like the wheels would hit your back. Also, since duffel bags are soft, I'm not sure the idea of a frame in them works very well with the traditional type of bag. I did a search for these types of bags in real life and the ones that came up all look squarish, more like conventional luggage. I also worry the bags would be harder to stack 200 in a pile on a truck.
 
So it's like a cart (sort of like a hand-truck) that you can strap a regular duffel onto?
 
yup 1/3rd of the set to the Wheeled Duffel bag. or you can buy it pre-installed. or independently as a stand alone item (lightweight luggage hand-truck)
 
If this were put into the Wiki it could get approved, as it stands its just an image on another site.
 
@Samanthia

Are you still actively working on this? Since it's primarily a duffel bag, it just needs to be on the wiki. On the other hand, since it's a personal item, you're most likely able to just go with it in RP as you'd like without needing approval.
 
@CadetNewb No. It kinda got trashed.

Anyone can use it. Permission granted. :) If that is what your after.

It was a just a forum quicky as I am still taking baby steps with the wiki and afraid to really mess things up.
 
That wasn't what I was after. XD

I'm trying to figure out if this article needs approval, review or so on, but looking at this, I'd say approval was not needed to start with?
 
It should probably be resubmitted as an article for the cart.

Though, being a mundane item, it doesn't necessarily need to have an article.
 
That's my exact thought. We could reject this on the grounds that it simply doesn't need to be submitted/have an article. XD

Plus, her duffel got trashed while this was sitting it would seem.
 
Pretty sure it got rejected due to the fact it is a pretty common item. According to Wes, it could be picked up anywhere as a common item within the galaxy. Depending on the needs of the individual.

So I pretty much gave up on it. I was being pretty bold to even attempt submitting it on the forums without a wiki page.

Nothing tried, nothing gained. As this was a learning experience for me.
 
Yeah, mundane items generally don't require articles. Like, for instance, a backpack doesn't need an article. However, the specific models or brands of things may warrant an article. For example, the standard design of backpack used by the Star Army of Yamatai has an article.
 
Since it doesn't have a wiki article, it has to go to rejected. It's not a bad submission, it just doesn't satisfy the rules for submissions. I'll move it.
 
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