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Approved Submission World of Kaloran

Yoerik

Yoerik

Inactive Member
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=media:kaloran
Submission Faction(s)
  1. Yamatai (except Elysia)
  2. Outlaws (Independent)
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Submission WIP URL https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:media:kaloran
Submission URL https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=media:kaloran

Submission Type: Media
Template Used: Video Media Template

  • Faction: Yamatai
  • FM Approved Yet? Not officailly, @Wes
  • Faction requires art? No.

  • For Reviewers:
  • Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
  • Contains New art? No
  • Previously Submitted? No
Notes: This is my own personal multimedia project to create a living world in the high fantasy genre, based on Tolkien's Middle Earth. Currently has only a television series and several books, both novels and sourcebooks.
 
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I added ⚠️ wherever you needed text/prose, such as under headers and before bullet lists, charts, or other headers.

Very well thought out!
 
I found some grammar errors but I was going to tell you about those after you added more text so that I didn't miss anything.
 
All right, I've redone the dates to Yamatai ones. Took me some time to recalculate, but it's done. Grammar is also fixed (I hope). Anything else?
 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ X ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ X ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ X ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ X ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ X ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ X ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ X ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ X ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ X ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ X ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved
 
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Elves comment: " Karmon'Zuu'Amon " (The Everqueen watches eternal)

Goblins growl: " Hoggrurgr Maggahagh " (phonetically: We will destroy you)
 
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