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Approved Character Yamakazi Itsuko

Alexi

Inactive Member
Name: Yamakazi Itsuko


General Information

Species: Nekovalkyrja NH-29
Gender: Self-Cloning (Female)
Age: 3 months

Family / Creators: Star Army of Yamatai

Employer: Star Army of Yamatai
Occupation: Starship Operations
Rank: Enlisted
Current Assignment: She is currently waiting for her first assignment.


Physical Characteristics

Height: 5 feet 2 inches = 1.57 m
Weight: 97 lbs = 44 kg
Measurements: N/A
Bra Size: A

Build and Skin Colour: Slender build, pale / white skin tone.
Facial Features and Eye Colour: Caucasian facial features, sharply angled chin, blue eyes.
Hair Colour and Style: Straight, raven black hair, which reaches down to the shoulder blades.

Distinguishing Features: Yamakazi is rather shy, quiet, and can get somewhat depressed.


Psychological Characteristics

Personality: Being of a rather sombre nature Yamakazi usually wears a lot of black when she is not on duty. Spending most of her time aboard the bridge learning as much as she can. She's not a beauty queen at all, but still quite a pretty girl, more like the girl next door. Not fussing around much with a lot of makeup. Yamakazi do keep herself neat and in good shape.


Likes: Chocolates
Dislikes: Arrogant men.
Goals: To one day be in command of her own starcruiser.


History

Being a very young neko, Yamakazi has not done much yet.Yamakazi spend her 4 months at the educational facility 1 in Kyoto "The Crècheâ€
 
Looking good so far, but she'll at least need a basic idea of her personality before she can be approved. As a neko, her history should be pretty easy, especially if she is young - just put where and when she was born (should be a minimum of YE 28 or earlier)
 
Personality: Being of a rather sombre nature Yamakazi usually wears a great deal of black when she is not on duty. Spending most of her time aboard the bridge learning as much as she can. She's not a beauty queen at all, but still quite a pretty girl, more like the girl next door. Not fussing around much with a great deal of makeup. Yamakazi do keep herself neat and in good shape.

History

Being a very young neko, Yamakazi has not done much yet. She spend most of her time training at the Kyoto war academy learning the ins and outs of the opperation and running of a starship.

( Added information for the starship operations skill )

Starship Operations: Yamakazi has her training in piloting all ships of the Star army of Yamatai, from small warhsips to the much larger cruisers. She spend a great deal of her time in training aboard the bridge to learn more of the flow of operations.
 
The Kyoto War Academy, from what I gathered, was an institution meant to train officers. The usual Star Army soldier doesn't train there but rather goes in Star Army basic training (which is usually undertaken in Star Fortresses or starships meant to train new recruits).
 
I agree with Fred. Academies are for officer training. New recruits are trained at basic training camps (some planetary, some on Star Fortresses) and then later on training vessels.

I plan to add a page on Star Army Training to the wiki soon.
 
So i should change it to something more like this ?

History

Being a very young neko, Yamakazi has not done much yet.Yamakazi spend her 4 months at the educational facility 1 in Kyoto "The Crècheâ€
 
That'll work.

You need one more skill, try something like a hobby? RPing is not all about war though. Some music skills, makeup, seduction? lol. Nekos may be massed produced soldiers but they are all still colourfull.

FIANEDIT: Oh, and be sure to "bump" the bio when you are ready for another re-evaluation.
 
Alexi,

Going to finish up this bio? Are you still with us?
 
Finishing up

I've added this skill,

Entertainment: In her off times at the educational facility Yamakazi has picked up some skills at the local clubs, dancing being her faviourite. She seems to know how to be pleasing and entertaining.

Sorry didn't look in recently, was pretty busy with work.
 
Distinguishing Features: Yamakazi is rather shy, quiet, and can get somewhat depressed.
This should probably be in the personality section.

The bio looks good. Approved.

Please add her to the wiki.
 
Click the "characters" link at the top of this page, then on that page, click "edit this page" and add your character name in the same format as the others. When you save, the name (since the page doesn't exist yet) will show up in red. Follow the red link and click "Create this page." Put your bio in there. There's a link on the edit screen that explains formatting.
 
Hey, I noticed you haven't requested orders yet. Everything okay?
 
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