Rejected Submission [Yamatai] Ke-M2-W3702 MASR + Bayonet

[Firebrand]

Submission Type: Service Rifle + Bayonet
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=stararmy:equipment:ke-m2-w3702_modular_armor_service_rifle + https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=staramy:ke_m2-w3703_special_operations_combat_knife

Faction: Yamatai
FM Approved Yet? Yes, Today
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes,
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No


Notes: Both Ammunition types have already been submitted.

 

[Doshii Jun]

Since I'm taking the squad weapon, I'll take this one too.

 

[Doshii Jun]

I'm taking an unusual step here. I expect to be overridden with this step, but I think it is warranted on a professional level.

This submission is grossly underdetailed, uses copy from a previous submission without any significant updates, includes no necessary or useful updates over the setting elements currently in use, and brings no added benefit to the faction, of which I am an assistant FM. The list of revisions alone would be longer than the one for the LMG, and that already was a long list.

This submission would replace the second-most-used PA weapon in the faction. It should meet, at a minimum, that weapon's submission quality. Yes, I wrote it. Yes, I demand you do at least as well as I did, which ain't all that.

Right now, this submission looks lazy, uninspired and frankly unworthy of the faction that is the face of the Star Army Role-Play.

This submission is rejected for IC usage. I offer no opportunity for revision. You can submit the knife separately.