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[Yamatai] - Ke-P2 (Series) Compact CRDM

Looks good, I like the simple page layout. It looks very clean.

In environmental systems I think places needs to be changed to placed.

I don't see any problems tech-wise with this submission.

After reading through it I am left wondering if the CCRD deploys on its own, or if it is unfolded manually (which personally I think is cooler in terms of flavor).

This bit isn't really important either, but it might be nice to have plugs and such to allow the CCRD to power other devices with its own on board power supply or even to use its environmental systems to purify the outside air in situations where its parent star ship is damaged and needs to have life support quickly restored.
 
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