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Yamatai National Police

SSharp

Inactive Member
Submission Type: Civilian/Cultural
Submission URL: Here

Faction: Yamatai
FM Approved Yet? No

Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No

Notes: Now, before people get all worked up because they're convinced "Yamatai has no crime!" I just have to point out that there'd be no police forces if there wasn't any crime ever, and that this article already existed before I went in and expanded upon it. All that was there when I got to it, however, was the art and the equipment list. I did take from the 'travelling around yamatai' article, where (oddly enough) there was more information on the YNP than in the YNP article.
 
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Made some edits. New unapproved sub-article: Here, which was made at the recommendation of Nashoba.

I'm also working on a YNP Rules/Procedures bit.

Edit: Got a basic procedures section down.
 
This looks good to me.
 
Just so we're clear: You didn't write all of this, right? Some of this is my writing, explaining the YNP.
 
With the exception of what I pulled from 'Travelling Around Yamatai' I wrote it all. The only thing on the article was the equipment and the police car picture.

Edit: What I took specifically is
I did change it up a bit. If that's your writing, then good on you. I also took the uniform bit, but I changed it up a bunch of times so I'm not really sure anymore what I did or didn't change from the original text.
 
I'd prefer the original text be kept, but I don't need the credit. I just wanted to make sure I wasn't seeing double.

I like that the YNP is taking pins!
 
Look again, besides, the Junsa is already approved tech, has been for years.

 
Wait, does this mean there's copy-pasta (eg the same text in two articles?)
 
Most likely when this page is finished being fleshed out the text from traveling around yamatai will be replaced with a link to this page instead for the law enforcement.
 
That works for me. I didn't have another place to put the stuff about police, so I stuck it on traveling around Yamatai. It can be stripped from there.

Edit: Shouldn't the YNP use a more modern NSP, such as the Type 29C or D? I'm not sure it even makes sense for them to use the GSP; the ability of an NSP to use nonlethal fire makes it uniquely ideal for police work.
 
I think you mean the '30. Edited. Are there any problems with this submission?

It has FM approval, and I'm not aware of anymore problems with it.
 
I know it's nitpicky, but I did mean the 29C or D. I figured the 30 would be saved for the military because the 30 replaced the 29 series.
 
I've looked at the 29 and it doesn't seem to have any variants. Can you provide me with the article you were looking at?
 
The Type 29 NSP is a smaller holdout-style pistol and is neither a replacement for the 28 nor was it replaced by the Type 30. The Type 30 is the direct replacement for the 28 and the 29 should be considered separately.
 
This thread has a bunch of comments, but no one has come out and said that they're reviewing this. So can I have some more problems pointed out/have this approved?
 
Wes approves, no one has complaints. Approved.

Just make sure to remove the Law Enforcement stuff from the Travelling page.
 
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