Approved Submission [Yamatai] Ocean Day

[Ametheliana]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=wip:faction:yamatai:ocean_day

Submission Type: Holiday
Template Used: None
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:yamatai: ocean_day
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:yamatai: ocean_day
(take out the space)

Faction: Yamatai
FM Approved Yet? No @Wes
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: I just changed the name to avoid confusion with Nepland's Marines.

 

[Reynolds]

If this is going to be Yamatai's beach holiday, I do think that watermelon smashing should be mentioned as one of the activities. That's definitely one of the cliche events in every beach episode. Besides that everything seems very cute and very good!

 

[Ametheliana]

Added the chop-chop game and several emoji!

 

[Soresu]

Ame, you misspelled Star in this line: No seafood is eaten on this day, stuffed toys that look like sea life are given and received, and those of the Yamatai Stat Empire flock to the beach and ocean.

 

[Ametheliana]

Fixed 'er on up! Thanks @Soresu!!

 

[Wes]

APPROVED