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If this is going to be Yamatai's beach holiday, I do think that watermelon smashing should be mentioned as one of the activities. That's definitely one of the cliche events in every beach episode. Besides that everything seems very cute and very good!
Ame, you misspelled Star in this line: No seafood is eaten on this day, stuffed toys that look like sea life are given and received, and those of the Yamatai Stat Empire flock to the beach and ocean.