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Approved Submission [Yamatai] Type 35 Light Gunship

CadetNewb

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Submission Type: Light Gunship/Troop Transport/Multipurpose Vehicle
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=stararmy:type_35_light_gunship_jinsoku_taka

Faction:
FM Approval: No
Faction Art Requirement: Yes

For Reviewers:
Unapproved Sub-Articles: No
New Art: Yes
Previously Submitted: No

Notes:
I've worked on this vehicle on and off for a long time, and decided I might a well put it up for review. Currently, there are two things missing - speed stats for the vehicle, as well as a description of the interior. Additionally, an OOC guide to the vehicle is also missing, but I intend to get to it later. Right now, I want somebody to look at it, and see how it is.

This vehicle, unlike the other transports we have for PA troops, is more combat orientated, and is also capable of exiting a planet's atmosphere on its own. On the other hand, it's larger and likely costs more, so its not the vehicle anybody wants to use to shuttle goods and supplies as the backbone of logistics. Emergency drops of ammo and such works out fine, but it's best off directly ferrying troops to and from the battlefield, as well as directly supporting them.
 
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So, are you giving your FM approval for this Wes? I won't proceed with my full review until that is done.
 
This review is for: Type 35 Light Gunship “Jinsoku Taka”

The submitted article is/has…
[-] A very high level of overall quality
[x] A general topic sentence under the title header
[x] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[x] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[x] In the proper format/template
[-] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[x] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[X] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[x] No red and/or broken links
[x] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[X] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[x] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[x] Obtusely redundant
[x] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[x] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[x] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[x] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[x] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[x] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[x] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[-] Lacking Detail
[x] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)

The article has…
[-] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[x] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[x] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[x] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.


Summary
Note here if any serious issues are present. These are the issues that will hold up approval.
** Short description of the issue. If a longer explanation is needed, put it in Notes.

Status: Pending

Notes
This field is for any extra description needed for the issues stated above or (as the name suggests) and additional notes you wish to state in the record regarding the item.

Grammar and spelling errors
It's error due to it's propulsion
the the assault
turn preventes deformation
, psyionic
It's primary

Lacking details
Appearance section is blank
Speed is missing
Interior description is black

I intend to finish this review by: Done
 
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